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Girl with Eyes ShiningThere was once a girl with a broken heart. She nursed it but only a little. Her eyes always shone with tears. Her hands shook because of the weight she held in her tiny hands. She went to her mother. "Mother, my heart is broken. Will you fix it?"

Her mother looked down her nose at the little girl and said, "No. Not until you learn how to behave."

She looked down at her toes and a tear fell from her shining eyes. Still holding her heart in her hands, she looked at her father. "Father, my heart is broken. Will you fix it?"

Her father looked away from his newspaper for a moment, "It gets on my nerves when you cry. Go away."

The girl sadly cl

True love VS First LoveIs it true that "true love never dies"?
For me it isn't because sometimes you say that the person you're with is your true love, you'll love him/her forever and tell yourself that you've found the one that would make you happy for the rest of your life but in the end you'll just fall flat and break up.

On the other hand, "first love never dies" is true because you can always remember and never forget the first person who made your heart beat for the first time :P

Crawling from EdenBroken skies over paradise lost, hide the falling stars
Wishes whisked in the unforgiving wind
Shifting soil of a collapsing world brings knee to ground
Screaming agony of the proud

There’s a new world on the horizon
Though dawn lies far from Eve
The black sun will rise to find
The lost soul crawling from Eden

Lonely skies over paradise lost, hide the falling hearts
Kisses whisked in the unforgiving wind
Missing peace of a collapsing world tumbling down
Screaming agony of the proud

There’s a new world on the horizon
Though dawn lies far from Eve
The black sun will rise to hide
A shadowed soul crawling from Eden

Open

Ever AfterEver After

Desperately she waits in a castle built of cards
Suites of denial, hope, regret, and what she thinks is love
The fragile tower sways in a whisper’s wind
The fragile girl stays in contemplation of the end

Her captor, her lover, warns “don’t look down
Because I don’t know how…
We can keep this dream together”
Not knowing how she hopes he’s right

***Chorus***
She falls to her knees
She cries into her sleep
Awaiting a chance to dream
Of a better ever after
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He tells her he loves her and her silence speaks her words
His armor just won’t shine the way she thinks it should
But s

VeilWarm memories melt granules of time,
Morphing moments into diamonds.
Naivety and denial mold his manipulations
Into a veil, masking her from his malice.

A mind full of maybes misinterpreting what is.
A bride, blind of his minding, maintains her vows.
Monotonous marriage wears his love
Into oblivion, apathetic release of wedlock.

His mistakes become her windows to the unfaithful.

Kisses, tasting of the lies hiding
His mistress, mate with lament. His sweat streams down
Marionette strings. Wincing, she cries away
The streaming salt that seeps into her veins.

She's left mourning with a shattered view,
Slivered and separated, beh

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I was just brooding about High School and this came to my head.
I was bullied a lot :\
I love how you can't see the text behind it unless you look closely.

THANK YOU TO EVERYONE WHO HAS COMMENTED AND FAV'D!
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~Abstactianarism Feb 8, 2011

WOW thisis amazing

~shatteredwisp Jan 6, 2011

I love the subtext!

!kurotaiyoo Aug 24, 2010 Traditional Artist

the almost invisible words make them seem like thoughts while the ones you can see are what you tell everyone.Hiding your feelings from the world. I really like this one (yes i like depressing pieces).

~Avallynh Aug 7, 2010 Hobbyist Writer

This is beautiful. Like the kind of beautiful that steals your breath for a second or two.

Well done.

~Scaveo Jul 11, 2010

I like this, it is simple yet exquisite, I can relate, And you have made something I had thought about doing yet couldn't get into my head how to do... which leads me to the question how did you make it?

~Plim-Chan Jul 16, 2010

I made it in Photoshop.
Just some words that I felt, and I just put them together

~Scaveo Aug 5, 2010

ahh ok thx
and sorry for the late reply

~saharapriincesz Dec 13, 2009

This is amazing. Says so much in so few words. Thank you.

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